CSI: NY Fan Fiction

Ok, so, like, I wrote this fan fic after reading a lot this summer, and my resident reader (((((Loth))))) says it's worth looking at. Now I just have to decide if I want to share it with ff.net, or keep it to myself and friends here. Here's the link:

http://homepage.mac.com/halavana/csinyfanfic-possibilities.html

Thanks for your input.
:^D
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